Hey, I really like the lyrics and the general rhythm but i feel like if you sped it up just a bit it would just sound better. I don't know if that's something you would consider given that the songs written to that effect. but apart from that i really dig it, good job. :)
It was written specifically to be slow. Zero desire was to make it faster, but I appreciate the input!
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